Under and Out.
'You
just have to collect it for fucks sake. How difficult can that be?'
'It's
in a bloody graveyard and you want me to go at night, on my own?'
'Jeez
Cooper. It's a graveyard in the centre
of London. How bloody scary can it be?'
'Come
with me?'
'No
chance. I'll call Ezra and have him meet you there.'
She
was starting to wish she was going. Pathetic, whinging bloody man.
What had she ever seen in him?
Still,
the sham was almost over. Ezra would have him six feet under before
morning came.
Nice piece.
ReplyDeleteTim.. Thanks...
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Good story! A lot going on in such a short piece.
ReplyDeleteThe comments work for me now! Thanks for tweaking them, if you did. And thanks for sharing the piece. I dig super-shorts, and liked the prospect of a fellow worrying about graverobbing in the middle of London for something other than getting caught.
ReplyDeleteExcellent Rosie. Loved the voice which is very prominent for such a short piece.
ReplyDeleteSuccinct and creepy, just the way I like it. :)
ReplyDeleteCreepy and I really liked the dialogue. ^_^ A good short!
ReplyDeleteIt seems his fears are well-grounded, soon to be well under-grounded.
ReplyDeleteIt says so much in such a short piece.
Thank you all for your comments... Means a lot..xx
ReplyDeleteGanymeder - I got a bit lost on your blog and couldn't find a story to comment on..xx
Nice. Short and creepy.
ReplyDeleteWow - creepy good...loved it!
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